The Call
As you know, I like to take part in Saturday Centus a writing meme from Jenny Matlock. Well, this week I’m afraid has really unnerved me becasue the rules have changed! We have to write in the style of Harequin Romance! I mean to say – the Head teacher writing like that!! To help us out, we can have 200 words as well as the prompt which is in bold. Please forgive me Dear Reader!:
WARNING
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I had to keep running. I had to get away. I could not stay even though every sinew in my body was aching for his caresses. It had been so wonderful to feel his hands searching my body discovering my every dip & mound but now I must run!
My breath was shortening with every painful step. The sweat was dripping down my already moist breasts trickling down that channel that separates them so perfectly. I could feel my blouse sticking to my back just as it had in the heat of our passion only a few hours ago. I could recall every movement that his lithe body made as he took me in his arms imploring me to surrender to him. I had tried to fight against it but those lips gently pressing those sweet kisses around my face; those fingers so gentle in their exploration which gradually grew in intensity as his body showed me his true desires.
I tried to move but knew that my resistance was at an end. I arched….
‘Miss Smith?’
When I turned around I was startled to meet a green eyed gaze.
‘Miss Smith? You can go in now.’
I put the magazine down.God, what a moment to have to go & see the dentist!
Hooray!!! What good writing, and you really nailed the HR genre. Who is your dentist? I want to read his magazines!
Naughty! Naughty! Found it quite difficult to start but once I got the end, it went OK!
MWAHAHAHA! Loved the twisty end!
Thanks PJ! Glad you liked it!Thanks for visiting!
Oh well done Julia! Fantastic twist in the tale, clever you!
C xx
Thank you! Felt a bit odd though!
This was amazing! What a cool ending too! Very impressed with where you took this! Makes me wish I were a dentist! Well done.
Many thanks! I didn’t like the idea of writing this genre but it went OK
LOL, this was really an amazing way to go with this. Good job.
Thanks Viki!
Oh Head Mistress – now we know the hidden you 😉 Great twist at the end – well done!
Thank you! I am worried I will no longer have control over the class now!! 🙂
Ah, running. Always running. Wonderful!
Thank you! So glad you visited – do pop in again!
Excellent! I had to read twice…you know that is a good thing!!!
Wow! That is such a great thing to say! I’m really pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for popping in!
Wow! This was great!! Your writing is fantastic… that poor dentist doesn’t know what’s coming 🙂
You made me smile with that comment! Thanks for visitng & do come along again!
Unbelievable! Seriously. This was GREAT.
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Thank you! glad to have met you via Centus!
That was brilliant wish my wait at the dentist was this good
Me too! Thanks for popping in!
This was absolute perfection from beginning to surprising end!
Aw Thank you! I felt quite uncomfortable about it at first but…! Thanks so much for stopping by!
Goodness me! I feel embarrased Reading it lol
I was quite nervous about it myself! Thank you so much for visiting!
Awesome. What a great take on the prompt. Very unique and cleverly written.
A nice and unusual twist to this one!
Thank you! It’s great to see you & hope you visit again!
Very, very clever! At least the dentist will think that your heaving bosom is from fear LOL
That’s a point! Thank you for commenting & hope to see you again!
You! Are! Brilliant!
This was so clever… and so ummm…. steamy!
What a fun, fun read!
Did you enjoy stretching your writing muscles? Even though it was in such an unlikely direction?
Thanks for linking up!
I am just grinning here like crazy from your cleverness!
didn’t enjoy the thought but once I got going…!
Brilliant, you really had me going wondering what the end could possibly be!!
Glad about that! mission accomplished!